English · Year 4

Plan, Draft, Improve: Extended Writing

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✍️ you are about to a . Would you just with no ? Of not! the way. They , a , then go and it. you will how to do all and by the end you will like a in of your own . Let's go!

📋 1 is . A is a , map of your before you . You use , a map (a of what in each ) or a (a with like , , , , ). because you know what to . You get at a !

your and it is only for you! Use or , not . The in your .

🧩 A writer is planning a story. Put these five planning sections in the correct order from start to finish. Drag them into place! 🗂️

  1. Ending — how does the character feel now?
  2. Resolution — the problem is solved
  3. Problem — something goes wrong
  4. Build-up — things start to get interesting
  5. Opening — introduce the character and setting

📝 2 is . You your and each into a . A is a of all about the . of each like a in that each has one job ( for , for ). When your , you a new , just as you to a new .

🔗 that and that and so your . There are : (, , the ), (using he, she, they so you do not a ), and (at the top of the , as the sun set). These the where, when or how things .

TypeWhat it doesExamples
Time connectiveShows when things happenfirst, meanwhile, the next morning, finally
Pronoun linkAvoids repeating nameshe, she, it, they, his, her
Adverbial phraseAdds detail about place or mannerdeep in the forest, without a sound, at last
Types of cohesive devices and examples 🔗

🗂️ Sort each phrase into the correct type of cohesive device. 🔗

  • the following day

  • at the edge of the cliff

  • she

  • meanwhile

  • beneath the old oak tree

  • they

🔍 3 is and . things a for a more one ( ), a , or a into two . things , , and . as a and as the .

📖 their many . some up to before he was ! Every with each .

⚠️ When you a , say one thing that before you an . This is called a : , , . It about their .

✍️ Complete these sentences about the writing process by choosing the correct words from the word bank. 📝

A is a map of your . You your into so each of one . so .

🌟 done! You now know all of the . : so you know where you are . so your are on the . and so your . Every of in the , , through these . Now it is your to use them!

Quiz time! 📝

Plan, Draft, Improve: Check Your Knowledge 🎯

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What is the of a ?

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